Tổng hợp 170 bài mẫu writing task 2 theo chủ đề

IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE

LAYOUT

The 35553 is a total of 21 sentences. At about 12 words per sentence this is 252 words.

 a 3-sentence Intro

 a 5-sentence para

 a 5-sentence para

 a 5-sentence para

 a 3-sentence conclusion

Conclusions

A good conclusion will

 rephrase the question

 summarize the main ideas

 give your opinion, if you haven't given it already

 look to the future (say what will happen if the situation continues or changes)

but will

 NEVER add new information

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IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE 
LAYOUT 
The 35553 is a total of 21 sentences. At about 12 words per sentence this is 252 words. 
 a 3-sentence Intro 
 a 5-sentence para 
 a 5-sentence para 
 a 5-sentence para 
 a 3-sentence conclusion 
Conclusions 
A good conclusion will 
 rephrase the question 
 summarize the main ideas 
 give your opinion, if you haven't given it already 
 look to the future (say what will happen if the situation continues or changes) 
but will 
 NEVER add new information 
Should we test products on animals? 
I agree that we need to make sure that animals who are used for testing new products 
have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is 
necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways. 
Should we beat children? 
In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However it 
should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we 
must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible. 
Is education important? 
In conclusion, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of 
education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated 
to the maximum of their ability. 
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Who are the better parents - men or women? 
I think this is not an either/or question. Both men and women have strengths and skills 
that are important for children's psychological growth. We need to ensure that both 
parents play an important role in the family in order to give children a good start in life. 
Who learns quicker - adults or children? 
Finally, I feel that we cannot generalize about children or adults being better learners. It 
depends on the situation and the motivation of the person, and the level of enthusiasm 
he or she has for learning. 
Should dangerous sports be banned? 
In summary, our society would be healthier if more people took part in sports of all 
kinds. We should continue to try to prevent accidents and injuries. However, we should 
also ensure that sports are challenging, exciting, and, above all, fun. 
Through recent medical advances we now have the capacity to determine the characteristics of 
unborn babies, produce clones, transplant animal organs to humans, as well as prolong life. 
Such technology is unethical, interferes with the course of nature and should be prohibited. To 
what extent do you agree with this opinion? 
1. In conclusion, recent medical advances offer us advantages such as prolonging our lives, 
improving the quality of our lives, and providing some infertile couples with the opportunity to 
experience parenthood. On the other hand, they pose dilemmas, including compromising our 
standard of living because of a dependent elderly population, potentially causing harmful mental 
and physical side effects, and undermining our ethical values. Therefore we have to think about 
them carefully or it will not be good. 
This example follows the suggested model of a concluding paragraph. The two summary 
statements succinctly paraphrase the main arguments. The paragraph makes a 
recommendation too, however, the benefits of this are not stated, so it is vague and 
unconvincing. 
2. What is more, poor people often cannot afford to pay for these new medical 
advances.Consequently, they are only a benefit to a small, affluent part of the population, so we 
should prohibit them. 
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This example does not follow the suggested model of a concluding paragraph. There is no 
statement referring to the main arguments or summary of them. In fact, it provides another 
argument, which the concluding paragraph should not contain. It does make a recommendation, 
however, this appears to be motivated by envy or jealousy, so it is not a very credible 
suggestion. 
3. To conclude, new medical advances have many positive outcomes. However, we should 
analyse our objectives carefully in order to decide what is appropriate and what should be 
permitted. If we do not, the result might not be longer more fulfilling lives, but instead,extended 
less satisfying existence. 
This example follows the suggested model of a concluding paragraph. The summary statement 
is good; it refers back to the main arguments. The paragraph makes a recommendation too, 
which seems logical and acceptable. 
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EDUCATION 
There have been immense advances in technology in most aspects of people's lives, especially 
in the field of education. Nowadays, an increasing number of students rely on computers to 
research for information and to produce a perfect paper for school purposes. Others have 
decided to leave the original way of learning to get knowledge through online schools. These 
changes in the learning process have brought a special concern regarding the possible 
decrease of importance of teachers in the classroom. 
Some people believe the role of teachers started to fade because computers have been helping 
some students to progress in their studies quicker than when compared with an original 
classroom. For example, in the same classroom, students have different intellectual capacities, 
thus some would be tied to a slow advance in their studies because of others‟ incapacity of 
understanding. In this way, pupils could progress in their acquisition of knowledge at their own 
pace using computers instead of learning from teachers. 
However, the presence of a teacher is essential for students because the human contact 
influences them in positive ways. Firstly, students realize that they are not dealing with a 
machine but with a human being who deserves attention and respect. They also learn the 
importance of studying in group and respect other students, which helps them to improve their 
social skills. 
Moreover, teachers are required in the learning process because they acknowledge some 
student's deficiencies and help them to solve their problems by repeating the same explanation, 
giving extra exercises or even suggesting a private tutor. Hence, students can have a bigger 
chance not to fail in a subject. 
In conclusion, the role for teachers in the learning process is still very important and it will 
continue to be in the future because no machine can replace the human interaction and its 
consequences. 
Sample 2 : 
Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with 
computers. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an 
enjoyable task for a kid. This, accompanied with the relaxing attitude and software 
interactivity, usually conduce to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher 
educational level; the availability of digital books, simulator and other academic 
materials, provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that 
otherwise would not be at hand. 
1. As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role 
for teachers in the classroom. 
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But, besides the increasing complexity and behavior of intelligent software, which is 
usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need of human interaction in the 
learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the 
necessity for a human being to be able to determine what the specifics needs of each 
individual are. The expertise of a teacher in how to explain and adapt complex concepts 
to different individuals can hardly be mimicked by a computer, no matter how 
sophisticated its software is. 
As computers are becoming a common tool for teaching, teachers should be more 
aware of their role as guides in the acquisition of knowledge rather than transmitters of 
facts. They have to be open minded to the changes that are taking places, keep 
updated and serve as a problem solvers in the learning process, thus allowing students 
to discover the fact for themselves. 
To summarize, in my personal view, teachers play and will() play an important role in 
the classroom, especially at the primary level. No matter how complex computers 
become, there will be no replacement for the human interaction, but in the way haw this 
interaction takes place. 
Excellent essay! Are you a native English speaker? Well done. The only problem: 
too long, 365 words instead of 250-265 maximum. 
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from 
studying after graduating from high school. This trend is not restricted to rich students 
who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to 
work and become economically independent for a period of time. 
The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes 
directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and 
experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living 
or traveling to other places have a broader view of life and better personal resources to 
draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in 
academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping 
with the challenges of student life. 
However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young 
adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an 
academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or 
to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is 
less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable 
career. 
2. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year 
between finishing high school and starting university studies. 
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do 
this. 
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My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is 
the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their 
lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and 
motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this. 
(291 words) 
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People learn through their entire lives. They constantly improve their knowledge and 
develop. I think that a college or university education should be available to all students 
because every person has the right to choose the way to self-perfection. Bellow I will 
give some of my reasons to support my position. 
First of all, every person should have the chance to get a higher degree, gain new 
knowledge and experience. However, some people believe that higher education should 
be available only to good students. I think it is silly. It is like to make unavailable 
traveling for one who does not have IQ high enough. 
Second of all, some young people do not do well at school but they have great 
personality and ability to learn. They are self-confident, persistent and patient. With 
these qualities they can get higher grades then their classmates who are talented but 
lazy. Imagine for example situation when a teenager gets high grades because his or 
her parents constantly make him or her study and help to do most of the homework. In 
this case a child does very well at school but I think a college can show the opposite 
results. 
Finally, it is a discrimination against students to make available higher education only 
for good ones. 
So, if a student does poor and gets low grades he/she should be sent down. But if a 
person was never given a chance to try himself/herself at college, what to do in this 
case? 
To sum up, I think that all young people should have the chance to get a higher 
education. To take or not this chance must be up to them. 
(277 words) 
From my everyday experience and observation I can stand that the best way of learning 
about life is through personal experience. However, some people think that it is wiser to 
learn about life through listening to the advice of family and friends. It does not mean I 
totally disagree with this way of learning. Moreover, I think that it is wise for a person to 
3. Some people believe that a college or university education should be available 
to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to 
good students. 
Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why. 
4. Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to 
the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of 
learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of 
these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? 
Use specific examples to support your preference. 
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take an intermediate position because each of these ways has its own advantages. 
Bellow I will give my reasons to support my point of view. 
From the one side, learning through one's personal experience brings many benefits. 
First of all, scientists say that personal experience has greater impact on a person. I 
have to agree with this. Take for example children. They will not believe their parents 
that something can hurt them until they try it and make sure in it. Furthermore, most 
likely they will remember this experience longer. Second of all, people learn how to 
analyze their mistakes, make conclusions and next time try to avoid them. So, I think it 
is a great experience that makes people stronger, more self-confident and persistent. 
They gain more knowledge and experience that will be very helpful and valuable in the 
future. 
From the other side, listening to the advice of family and friends brings many benefits 
too. Parents with great patience pass down their knowledge and experience to their 
children. They teach them all they know and they want their children do not make the 
same mistakes. In addition to those practical benefits, learning from someone's advice 
is painless. For example, parents nowadays very often talk to their children about drugs. 
I think it is a great example when one should not try drugs in order to gain new 
experience. I think it is a case when children must trust their parents. 
To sum up, I think it is wise to combine both of these ways to learn and try to analyze 
personal mistakes as well as not personal. I think together they can greatly simplify 
one's life and make the way to success shorter. 
(350 words) 
What young people should study at school has long been the subject of intense debate 
and this is a question that certainly does not have one correct answer. 
We need to provide young people the best possible chance of doing well at school. In 
traditional curriculum there is a wide variety of subjects with a mix of academic and non- 
academic subjects. In this way a young person is formed with a rounded education. 
Non-academic subjects would include sports, cooking, woodwork and metalwork. I 
believe this is the best form of education. A young person should learn things other than 
academic subjects. Sport is particularly important. Young people have to learn to love 
sport so that they can be fit and healthy later in life. If not we will be raising an obese 
and unfit generation. 
5. With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some 
people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and 
cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate 
wholly on academic subjects. 
To what extent do you agree or disagree? 
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