Problem - Solution pattern in English online brief news on Vietnam
Nowadays, presses in general and online
press in particular have become more and more
popular means of communication. A lot of
people search webs to find information and one
of their favorite places is online brief news.
Online brief news is said to be a useful and
typical demonstration of text patterns. It is
where the authors often convey as sufficient
information as possible within the limit of news
and it is also a place where certain features of
language are clearly manifested.
Text patterns play important roles in
organizing a discourse. In English discourses,
such patterns as problem-solution pattern,
general- specific pattern, claim-counter claim
pattern, advantage-disadvantage pattern are
most usually used in organizing a discourse.
Among them, the former is the most widely
used. According to Grimes (cited in [1]: “both
plot of fairy tales and the writings of scientists
are built on a response pattern. The first part
gives a problem and the second its solution”.
The role of problem-solution pattern in creating
coherence in discourse is clearly realized [2-4].
Being interested in problem solution pattern
with a hope to help Vietnamese learners to have
a wide range knowledge of English and writing
organization the author wishes to focus on
dealing with the following questions:
- How is problem-solution pattern
manifested in English online brief news on
Vietnam?
- How is problem-solution pattern applied
in English learning and teaching?
VNU Journal of Science, Foreign Languages 25 (2009) 146-153 146 Problem-solution pattern in English online brief news on Vietnam Ngo Dinh Phuong* Department of Foreign Languages, Vinh university, 182 Le Duan, Vinh city, Nghe An, Vietnam Received 4 February 2009 Abstract. Prolem-solution pattern is one the most frequently used structures in online brief news. This paper aims at analyzing the ways the writers use it in online brief news of economic, political and social issues on Vietnam. The research results can help Vietnamese learners of English apply the above pattern to improve their English speaking and writing skills. 1. Rationale* Nowadays, presses in general and online press in particular have become more and more popular means of communication. A lot of people search webs to find information and one of their favorite places is online brief news. Online brief news is said to be a useful and typical demonstration of text patterns. It is where the authors often convey as sufficient information as possible within the limit of news and it is also a place where certain features of language are clearly manifested. Text patterns play important roles in organizing a discourse. In English discourses, such patterns as problem-solution pattern, general- specific pattern, claim-counter claim pattern, advantage-disadvantage pattern are most usually used in organizing a discourse. Among them, the former is the most widely used. According to Grimes (cited in [1]: “both plot of fairy tales and the writings of scientists ______ * Tel.: 84-038-3855392. E-mail: ngodinhphuong@vinhuni.edu.vn are built on a response pattern. The first part gives a problem and the second its solution”. The role of problem-solution pattern in creating coherence in discourse is clearly realized [2-4]. Being interested in problem solution pattern with a hope to help Vietnamese learners to have a wide range knowledge of English and writing organization the author wishes to focus on dealing with the following questions: - How is problem-solution pattern manifested in English online brief news on Vietnam? - How is problem-solution pattern applied in English learning and teaching? 2. Problem-solution pattern The problem-solution pattern begins with the description of a situation that contains a problem. The problem requires a response, which is followed by a description of its result, with an evaluation of the response or result at the end. According to Hoey [1], “any genre of text, such as the plot of fairy tales or the N.D. Phuong / VNU Journal of Science, Foreign Languages 25 (2009) 146-153 147 writings of scientists, includes the problem- solution pattern”. This pattern is typically used in persuasive writing. The problem is stated and accompanied by some potential solutions. In addition, in problem-solution pattern, the key element that marks the completion of the pattern is a positive evaluation of at least one of the possible solutions. Hoey [1] states that problem-solution pattern arises as a result of the writer answering a predictable series of questions which reflect the relationship between the sentences of the text. The order in which these questions are answered is, however, not fixed. Such questions would be of the type: “what problem arose you?”, “what did you do about this? “which would be the key questions, and “what was the result? Another of the main characteristics of this pattern is that it is lexically signaled. In Hoey’s words “Text can be defined as the visible evidence of a reasonably self-contains purposeful interaction between one or more writers and one or more readers”. This interaction can be seen as series of hypothetical questions the reader makes to the writer and that the latter answers, or should answer, both locally (at sentence level) and globally (at discourse level) and that may be prefixed and, therefore, known both to the reader and writer. Problem-solution pattern is the most common one which is characterized by the following elements: an optional previous situation, which provides a context for the pattern; the problem or aspect of a situation requiring a response; the response to the problem and a positive result or an evaluation [2,5]. 3. Data sources In the world of integration today, online brief news plays an important part in transmitting information. It has become a more and more powerful mean of communication; authors usually adopt appropriate ways to indicate information. For this reason, we decide to choose this topic to help learners know how to organize a text effectively. The data for analysis is taken from online brief news on internet via the website: in which several sources are presented such as Reuters, AP, AFP, etc. 4. Structure of online brief news Online brief news is a type of news that is widely used nowadays. It often indicates the facts without the writer’s opinion about it. Typical news is structured into three main parts: the headline, the lead and the body. In the headline, the main idea of the news is usually presented. The lead is the opening paragraph and usually contains the main idea but in more details. And the body-the rest of the news - describes the news in full details. This structure is often applied in online brief news. Let us give an example to illustrate for the structure: Headline: Vietnam car sales rocket 83 percent in first nine months Lead: Vietnamese car sales have rocketed 83 percent in the first nine months of the year, manufacturers said on Saturday. Body: Sales have shot up to 49,240 vehicles against 26,934 in the same period last year, the Vietnamese Automobile Manufacturers’ Association (VAMA) said. Passenger car sales between January and September were reported at 10,882 vehicles, a rise of 145 percent. The figures were compiled from 16 of VAMA’s 18 members. Data were not available for the other two members. The biggest rise belonged to Japan’s Honda which sold 2,729 locally assembled vehicles, up 858 percent from last year’s 285. Next in the list was Vidamco, a joint venture between South Korean GM Daewoo and a Vietnamese company with a 305 percent rise in sales. In September alone, VAMA members sold 7,683 units, up by 99 percent against the same month of 2006. (AFP, October 6, 2007) N.D. Phuong / VNU Journal of Science, Foreign Languages 25 (2009) 146-153 148 4.1. Problem-solution pattern in English online brief news on Vietnam 4.1.1. Headline The headline is a very important part of each news. It often contains the main idea of the whole news. When considering any news to read, the reader often pays much attention to its headline. Therefore, the headline is organized in an attractive way to attract the reader’s attention. If the headline is the reader’s interest, they may decide to read the rest of the news. Usually, the headline is written in full form like (1) and (2) below: (1)Vietnam approves plans to sell shares in Vietcombank in Oct. (Dow Jones, September, 30, 2007) (2)Vietnam car sales rocket 83 percent in first nine months. (AFP, October, 6, 2007) In this paper, we analyze news-in-brief to see a particular aspect of discourse analysis-the problem-solution pattern. As mentioned above, the problem-solution pattern starts off with a problem that needs to be solved. However, off all 15 headlines of this kind taken into analysis, only 9 ones reveal a situation, accounts for 60%. If the headline is studied in separation with the rest of the whole news, no signal of problem-solution pattern can be found. In fact, we have studied these headlines in the linkage and in a particular setting of news. Our survey also shows that, there is no solution or evaluation that can be found in the headline. And the situation is indicated mainly via single words. Of all 129 words in the analyzed headlines, signaling vocabulary is 14, taking 10, 9% in which the proportion of nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs are as below: Table 2.1. Signaling vocabulary in the headline Nouns Verbs Adjectives Adverbs Total of signaling vocabulary Total Percentage Total Percentage Total Percentage Total Percentage 14 3 21.4% 7 50% 3 21.4% 1 7.2% yhiuôio 4.1.2. Lead The lead of news is often the first sentence (or the first paragraph of news). It is often a sentence and in this part; the theme of the news is more detailed stated. The headline is often restated but in more details. The lead often gives information of who, what, where, when and how the news is about. Following is an extract for illustration. (4) Headline: Vietnam trade deficit tops 7.6 billion US dollars- estimate Lead: Vietnam estimated Friday its trade deficit topped 7.6 billion US dollars in the first nine months of the year, raising fears of a record year end figure, an official said. (Thomson Financial, September, 8, 2007) Who: an official What: its trade deficit toped 7.6 billion US dollars in the first nine months of the year When: Friday Where: Vietnam This lead not only restates the situation but also a problem through signaling vocabulary: raising fears; these two words tell us that trade deficit would lead to a problem- that is a record year-end figure. The table below indicates signaling vocabulary occurring in the analyzed leads: Table 2.2. The presence of vocabulary in leads surveyed Leads Occurrences Percentage Without vocabulary 8 46.7% With vocabulary 7 53.3% Total 15 100% N.D. Phuong / VNU Journal of Science, Foreign Languages 25 (2009) 146-153 149 4.1.3. Body Obviously, the body is the longest part in a news story. If the headline is a short sentence and the lead is often a sentence that restates the headline in more details, the body is where the news is informed in full details. For this reason, it is where textual patterns are manifested clearly especially problem-solution pattern. The table below shows the average length of the news taken into analysis in terms of number of sentences and paragraphs. Table 2.3. Statistics of bodies of selected news Paragraphs Sentences Total of bodies Total Per body Total Per body Per paragraph 15 43 2.87 214 14.27 4.98 Table2.3: Statistics of bodies of selected news As the fact that the body accounts for the largest part in the news, therefore, problem- solution pattern is manifested the clearest in this part. The problem-solution pattern can be indicated through the pattern (situation-problem- solution-evaluation) or through signaling vocabulary. Let us examine one piece of news to illustrate the pattern. (5) S’pore imports of Vietnam foodstuffs jump as it becomes top global supplier Problem- solution pattern analysis of the selected news: Hoey [1] says problem-solution pattern is signaled by the means of questions. He suggests that written passages are implicitly designed to answer spoken questions. We adopt the way to analyze of Couthard as in the example mentioned above to analyze its structure: cvnbn Situation (1) Vietnam is the top food products supplier in the world (seafood, rice, pepper, coffee) Problem (16) Poor quality of products (15) Uneven quality of goods (20) Exporting countries scrutinize goods for contamination Solution (to the problem) (13, 18) Improve goods quality (21) Invest heavy in post- harvest technology Evaluation (of the solution) (21) Food product quality will be upgraded N,kk There is a given situation. Vietnam has emerged as a leading supplier of food products - from seafood to pepper and coffee-to the world, including Singapore. However, the whole situation is not completely clear in this sentence. In (2), (3), (4), the information about Vietnam food products is stated. Singapore’s imports of Vietnamese products increased considerably in comparison with two years ago. The reader can see in the viewpoint (5), (6), (7) and (8) the additional information to support the situation - Vietnam is the world’s top exporter of pepper, No.2 exporter of seafood and rice. Recently, it emerged as the world’s second largest coffee exporter after Brazil. At this point, the reader is most likely provoked to ask the question: “what seems to be the problem?”. What is the problem? From the word “booming” “issue”, “uneven quality” indicated the situation in which we see a problem is that Vietnamese food products has not reached its higher position for its poor quality. What aspect of the situation required a response? From point (13) to (18), the reader sees how the situation is; Vietnam is the world’s top exporter, and our product quality has been N.D. Phuong / VNU Journal of Science, Foreign Languages 25 (2009) 146-153 150 improved steadily; it is not as good as that of other countries like Thailand or Brazil. What was the solution? What was the result? In point (21), the reader sees (suggestions on how to improve goods quality) possible solution to the problem. It is to improve our food product quality. To do that, we need to invest heavily in the post-harvest technology. If we can do that, our food product quality will be upgraded. And it means that we solve the problem of uneven and poor quality of products. In the last point, the reader can also see an evaluation of the solution although it is not indicated explicitly. 4.1.4 Signaling Vocabulary Vocabulary identifies the topic and the structure of a discourse. McCarthy mentions that when text is read, the reader can “match the words with the segments” and that the reader “can account of what the problem-solution pattern is” [6]. In the following table, specific vocabularies and phrases are shown in how they occur in the news and in what part of the problem- solution pattern they fit into: Situation Leading supplier of food products, the next time, quadruple, triple. Problem Booming, quality control, issue, uneven quality, poor quality Solution (to the problem) Invest heavily, post-harvest technology Evaluation(of the solution) Quality upgraded The given - new principle in which he explains that all texts have “beginning and endings” [3]. The start of the problem-solution pattern with the word ‘emerged’ is the beginning of the situation and it is further informed with the phrase “leading supplier of food products”. From the word “booming”, “uneven quality”, “issue”, we see a problem; and from the word “invest heavily”, “post- harvest technology”, we see the solution for the problem. And the word “upgrade” reveals an evaluation for the solution. In the right column of the table above, there are no completed sentences but just words and phrases that relate to the segments of the problem-solution pattern. Our survey shows that the problem- solution pattern is mostly indicated through signaling vocabulary. The table below informs the vocabulary that is used in all analyzed news: Table 2.4. The presentation of pattern and signaling vocabulary in news selected Bodies With pattern Without pattern Total 6 (40%) 9 (60%) 15 (100%) With vocabulary 6 (100%) 5 (55.5%) 11 (73%) Without vocabulary 0 (0%) 4 (44.5%) 4 (27%) Total 6 (100%) 9 (100%) 15 (100%) gjkk From the table above, we can see that of all the 15 news of this kind taken into analysis, there is no news that is written without vocabulary but with pattern. From this point, it is easy to realize the important role of signaling vocabulary in organizing a text, especially with problem- solution pattern. Only through some key words, the reader can see the problem. In our survey, in terms of signaling vocabulary, we pay much attention to parts of speech that contribute to indicating pattern in text. The table below shows the proportion of parts of speech which are most widely used to indicate problem in the news surveyed in terms of nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs. N.D. Phuong / VNU Journal of Science, Foreign Languages 25 (2009) 146-153 151 Table 2.5. The proportion of signaling vocabulary indicating problem Parts of speech Nouns Verbs Adjectives Adverbs Occurrences Total 25 21 14 5 65 Proportion 38.5% 32.3% 21.5% 7.7% 100% Table 2.5. The proportion of signaling vocabulary indicating problem As seen in the table above, of all 65 occurrences of vocabulary, nouns account for the largest proportion with 25 occurrences (38.5%) , verbs ranked the second with 21 occurrences (32.3%), and adverbs hold the least proportion with only 5 occurrences (7.7%). Also shown in our survey is that, to reveal a problem, the following words are mostly used: Problem, concern, lack, inflation, difficult, dangerous, issue, increase, face, uncertain, etc. Let us give an extract to illustrate for this fact: (6) Vietnam faces port capacity shortfall Infrastructure bottlenecks, including a lack of highway access to a new port complex at Cai Mep, could threaten Vietnam’s export base, according to a leading manufacturer, writes Keith Wallis. Jeff Ross, director of global ocean transportation for sport wear maker Nike, said infrastructure construction on ports, roads, and railways as lagging behind the growth in container volumes. He estimated there would be a shortfall in port capacity of 220,000 tons in southern Vietnam this year. This is seen as a key concern especially as ports in Hochiminh city handle about 72% of the country’s container traffic, while Haiphong, near Hanoi, and handle around 22%... “Our concern is even as they build the port there is no infrastructure”. Creaking road and bridge links in the city dash; the Dongnai Bridge could also collapse at anytime according to officials’ dash; are also a concern. (Lloyd’s list September, 19, 2007) In the body of this text, there are a lot of vocabularies (the underlined and italic words) that support the problem of a shortfall in port capacity. It links information leading to the problem in text and makes the text coherent. From these words, we can see that the key problem is infrastructure for port capacity. In which, several examples of infrastructure are given. They are all inefficient or downgraded- from railway to road and bridge. In this piece of news, there are some typical words that relate to the problem-solution pattern such as concern or problem. We also analyze the solution part to see how signaling vocabulary is used in this part. The result is summarized in the following table: Table 2.6. Proportion of signaling vocabulary indicating solution In bodies Nouns Verbs Adjectives Adverbs Occurrences Total 6 17 1 3 27 Proportion 22.2% 63% 3.7% 11.1% 100% Table 2.6. Proportion of signaling vocabulary indicating solution As shown in the table, verbs hold the largest proportion with 17 occurrences (63%), while adjectives take the least with only one occurrence (3.7%). By contrast with problem part, signaling vocabulary seems to occur less in this part. This is explainable for the fact that the body takes the longest part in the news in which the problem is gradually stated. At the end, possible solutions are given to resolve the problem. It means to do something to solve the N.D. Phuong / VNU Journal of Science, Foreign Languages 25 (2009) 146-153 152 problem. Therefore, verb is the most suitable adoption to solve a problem. Let’s examine the following example to see this: (7) ADB lends Vietnam nearly $1 bln for
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