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amily lives in the peaceful country.
There are a lot of childhood memories ,
familiar images in here. House of my family
is a familiar image of mine. The house is
beautiful and large. It is on crossroads and
has five rooms
My father is a bicycle repairer so the first
room is shop of his. This shop has many
bikes. There are many customers who come
to here to repair their bike or buy new bikes
, so he works hard everyday .
The second room is a living room. It is
small, comfortable. The customers usually
talk with my father in this room. In the
morning, I and my father often set in living
room to read newspaper, watch TV or listen
music.The kitchen and bath room are biside
living room. The kitchen is comfortable. My
family always have the evening in here , so
everybody is very happy.
In second floor, there are two bedrooms and
a balcony. The balcony is my small garden .
I am very fond of plants, so there are a lot of
plants as orchids in here.
My family lives in the peaceful country a
peaceful rural area ( nếu nói chung chung
thì dùng in the countryside còn muốn thêm
chữ peaceful thì phải dùng cách khác ).
There are where I have a lot of childhood
memories , familiar images in here.The
house of my family is a familiar image of
mine. The house is beautiful and large. It is
on at a crossroads and has five rooms
My father is a bicycle repairer ,so the first
room is shop of used as his shop.( used as :
được dùng làm ) This shop has sells many
bikes. There are many customers who come
to there to repair their bikes or buy new
bikes , so he works hard everyday .
The second room is a the living room. It is
small, but comfortable. The customers(
không xác định không dùng the ) usually
talk with my father in this room. In the
morning, I and my father often set insit in
the living room to read newspaper, watch
TV or listen to music.The kitchen and the
bathroom are biside beside the living room.
The kitchen is comfortable. My family
always have the evening in here dinner
there ,( bữa ăn chiều dùng dinner ) so
everybody is very happy.
In On the second floor, ( tầng lầu dùng on
)there are two bedrooms and a balcony. The
balcony is also my small garden . I am very
fond of plants, so there are a lot of plants
such as orchids in herethere
Bài viết củamtvn
My house is quite big. It’s a 3 storeyes
house on HBT street in RG city. There are 4
bed-rooms. However, we only use 2 rooms
for sleeping. Two others are used for
relaxing and taking exercise. Every storeyed
has both a toilet but there isn’t toilet in
Terrace. This storeyed is to hang out the
washing and plant the trees. When you come
in my house, you will see the living room.
It’s the place that you’re standing. And you
will see my kitchen if you go about 15
metres. There is a big table in the middle,
many chairs in the kichen. The toilet is
beside the kitchen. Both the living room and
the kitchen are through. Everynight I have
to go to the steps to go to bed. Because I
often “dậy muộn” , I have to take exercise
in my room
My house is quite big. It’s a 3 storeyes 3-
storey house ( tính từ ghép dùng gạch nối
và danh từ không có s nhé )on HBT Hai
BaTrung street in RG Rach Gia city. There
are 4 bed-rooms. bedrooms (bedrooms viết
liền không có gạch nối ).However, we only
use 2 rooms for sleeping. TwoThe others
are used for relaxing and taking exercises.(
the others để chỉ những cái còn lại cuối cùng
trong chuổi - còn two others là chỉ 2 cái
trong chuổi nhưng chưa phải là cái cuối
cùng ) Every storeyed floor has both a toilet
,but there isn’t a toilet in the Terrace.( có ai
làm toilet trên sân thượng bao giờ nhỉ ? !)
This storeyed It is used to hang out dry out
( phơi đồ )the washing and plant the trees.
When you come in my house, you will see
the living room first . It’s the place that
you’re standing. ( câu này không có nghĩa gì
cả nên bỏ )And you will see my kitchen if
you go about 15 metres. There is a big table
in the middle, many chairs in the kitchen.
(hai câu này nghĩa cũng không liền lạc )The
toilet is beside the kitchen. Both the living
room and the kitchen are through(???).
Every night I have to go to up the steps to
go to bed. Because I often “dậy muộn”get
up late , I have to take exercise do morning
exercises in my room
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Bài viết của BeDau
My house is not so large but not so small. A
two-storey house locates in district 5. there
are two families in my house. That is my
family and my aunt’s family. My family lives
on first floor. My floor is divided in three
area. The first area is the living room. The
living-room is small, It is just enough a set
of sofa and a television. The second area is
the bed room. It have three beds but my
mother cleared them away because my
family like sleeping in the floor than in the
bed. It is more cool. The third area is the
rest-room. There is a small bathtub in there.
The ground floor is the kitchen. My kitchen
is clean. It is fitted with all covenient
equipment. That’s all in my lovely house.
My house is not so (too) large but not so
(too) small. It is (câu thiếu chủ từ) A two-
storey house (town house) which is locatesd
(người ta thì sẽ locate cái gì đó, nhưng
building/house thì to be located) in district
5. there are two families in my house (live
under the same roof). That is my family and
my aunt’s family. My family lives on the
first floor. My floor is divided in three areas.
The first area is the living room. The living-
room is small, It is just enough for a set of
sofa and a television. The second area is the
bed-room (bedroom không viết rời). It have
has three beds but my mother cleared them
away because my family like sleeping in on
the floor than in the bed. It is more cooler
(so sánh hơn của tính từ ngắn (tính từ 1 vần
thì thêm -er). The third area is the rest-room.
There is a small bathtub in there. The
ground floor is (serves as) the kitchen. My
kitchen is clean. It is fitted with all
convenient equipment. That’s all in my
lovely house.
Bài viết của hoangbankem
i will introduce my house with everybodỵ my
house has five room,a living room,
akitchen,and three bedroom.A living room
has a television, a sofa, a fan and has a
armchair,my father usually entertain in
living room. sometime we usually play game
in living room, a kitchen is here my mother
often cook,we have three bedroom, my
parent has a room, i has a room, my brother
has a room,we usually make homwork on
livingroom,every night we often gather
watch tv, then we will play card together,
we have a family very happinẹss my house is
small and rather old but i very love my
house because where to bring happiness
and pride.it is my life.
thank all
i ("I" luôn luôn phải viết hoa bạn nhé) will
introduce my house with to (introduce đi
với giới từ to) everybodỵ. my house has five
rooms, :a living room, a_kitchen,and three
bedrooms.A The (living room đã đề cập ở
trên rồi nên dùng mạo từ xác định) living
room has a television, a sofa, a fan and has
an armchair, . my father usually entertain
relax (wrong word choice: entertain có
nghĩa là invite hoặc amuse others) in the
living room (here) . sometimes we usually
(đã dùng sometimes sao lại có usually nữa?)
play games in the living room, . a The
kitchen is here (the place where) my mother
often cooks (thì dĩ nhiên là kitchen là nơi để
cook rùi),. we have three bedrooms, my
parents hasve a room, i has a room, my
brother has a room,. we usually make do
homework on in the living_room, .every
night we often (đã có every night là quá
thường xuyên rồi còn thêm often làm gì nữa
vậy kà!) gather to watch tv TV, then we will
play cards together, . we have a very happy
family very happinẹss .my house is small
and rather old but i very love my house very
much because where to it brings happiness
and pride.it is my life.
thanks all
Phần Relative pronouns bạn dùng còn hay
bị sai nhé. Bạn cứ dùng lặp trạng từ chỉ thời
gian (sometimes, usually, often, etc.) và bạn
cũng hay quên -s sau động từ và danh từ.
Lần sau trước khi nộp bài bạn nên đọc lại
(proofread) để tránh lỗi này & lỗi spelling
nha. Chúc học tốt
Bài viết của Ho Thi Minh Anh
Introduce about my house.
I am living in Hochiminh City where land is
very expensive, and own the house is a
difficult problem, but I am a lucky girl after
getting marrige we bought a house. My
house is small but I love it very much, it has
2 bedrooms and a living room. I arrange
everything in my house neatly and clearly.
After my work time, I give all my free time
for rearrange my house. When I finish my
work and look around the house, I am very
proud of myself.
Bài viết của nguyenkimhanh
That is a beautiful flat .There are two bed
room, one the living room and a small
kitchen. Sometimes, we have a party with
member of our family.
Introduce about my house.
I am living in Hochiminh City where
(housing) land is very expensive, and so
owning (động từ bare inf không làm chủ từ
được) the a house is a difficult big/serious
problem (bản thân problem đã bao hàm
nghĩa difficult rồi), but I am a lucky girl
after getting marriage we bought a house
(câu quá dài). My house is small but I love
it very much, . it has 2 bedrooms and a
living room. I arrange everything in my
house neatly and clearly ?. After my
work(ing) time (office hours), I give (spend)
all my free time for to rearrange (the
furniture) my house. When I finish my work
and look around the house, I am very proud
of myself.
That is a beautiful flat .There are two bed-
rooms (bedroom không viết rời ra), one (a)
the living room and a small kitchen.
Sometimes, we have a party with members
of our family (? câu này mình đọc thấy
không ăn nhập gì đến cái nhà của bạn cả?).
Bạn viết quá ngắn, lần sau cố gắng dành
thời gian viết nhiều hơn nhé.