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my names xuan. i was born in Thai Binh town.Now, my fimily is in Lam Dong. My fimily has 
six people.My mother is a farmer, she is forty-six years old.I love my mother a lot.She does hard 
working and she allway has to worry for her family.My father is a farmer, too. He is fifty years 
old, he loves his children and we love him very much. he does hardworking to earn momey for 
our sturdying. 
My older sister is a master of gadernschool. she is twenty-seven years old. She doesn't get 
merried. She usually gives us money when we study far home. Now, i live in HCM city. I am a 
new officer. i have just graduated at collect of forgein economic relation school and i apply my 
CV in my company last month and i work for two weeks. i do accounting works. about two 
months i come back home one time. I miss my fimily and i want to live in Lam Dong with my 
family but i can't because i have to continue to study hight level. i like studying english so i join 
in this web. i wish that all person in this web help each orther. my younger sister is a student. she 
is studying a training teaching school in Da Lat. she is very excellent and she likes a teacher. i 
and she usually contact together by phone.My youngest sister is a pupil. she is studying in grade 
four. 
I love my family very much and i think my family is a happy family 
my name's xuan. i I was born in Thai Binh town.Now, my fimily family is in Lam Dong. 
Myfimily family has six people.My mother is a farmer, ; she is forty-six years old.I love my 
mother a lot.She does hard working and she allway always has to worry for take care of her 
family.My father is a farmer, too. He is fifty years old, he loves his children and we love him 
very much. he does hardworking works hard to earn momey money for our sturdying studying 
. 
My older sister is a master of gadernschool kindergarten . she is twenty-seven years old. She 
doesn't get merried is not married. She usually gives us money when we study far from home. 
Now, i I live in HCM city. I am a new officer. i Ihave just graduated at from collect of forgein 
foreign economic relation school and i I apply 
applied my CV in my company last month and i I have worked for two weeks. i I do 
accounting works work as an accountant . about two months i Icome back home once time. I 
miss my fimily family and i Iwant to live in Lam Dong with my family but i Ican't because i I 
have to continue to study hight at high level. i I like studying english English so i I join in this 
web. i I wish that all person all members in this web help each orther other. my younger sister 
is a student. she is studying at a training teaching school in Da Lat. she is very excellent and she 
likes to become a teacher. i I and she usually contact together each other by phone.My 
youngest sister is a pupil. she is studying in grade four. 
I love my family very much and i I think my family is a happy family 
Chữ I luôn viết hoa nhé 
lo lắng với nghĩa là chăm lo thì dùng :take care of không dùng worry ( lo âu chuyện gì ) 
bài của bạn nhiều lỗi quá ,cần cố gắng nhiều hơn nhé 
Bài sửa của wellfrog và bổ sung tí của kawaiami 
Bài viết của phitruong 
There are six people in my family, my parent, my wife, my daughter, my sister and me. 
My father is a policeman. His work is very busy, when everybody go out, he has to work. My 
mother retired two year ago. Now, she is a housewife, her main work is to go the market, to buy 
food and to prepare meal for my family. She is a very good mother. 
My sister is less than me two year old, she lives in Ha Noi city, she is a insurance agent. 
Sometime, she goes to the Hai Phong city to meet us. 
My wife is a public servant, she works for duty office of Hai Phong city.I am a civil engineer, I 
work for Bach Dang Construction Corporation. We have a daughter, her name is Phuong Uyen, 
and she is one year old. 
We usually are interested together, we are a happy family. 
Cám ơn wellfrog rất nhiều! 
There are six people in my family, my parents, my wife, my daughter, my sister and me. 
My father is a policeman. His work is very busy, when everybody goes out, he has to work. My 
mother retired two years ago. 
Now, she is a housewife, her main work is to go to the market, to buy food and to prepare meal 
for my family. She is a very good mother. My sister is less than me two year old two years 
youger than me , she lives in Ha Noi city, she is an insurance agent. Sometimes, she goes to the 
Hai Phong city to meet us. 
My wife is a public servant, she works for a duty office of Hai Phong city.I am a civil engineer, 
I work for Bach Dang Construction Corporation. We have a daughter, her name is Phuong 
Uyen, and she is one year old. 
We usually are interested together care for one another ( chăm sóc ,quan tâm nhau ), we are 
have a happy family. 
so sánh có số lượng dùng : số lượng trước so sánh nhé 
Bài sửa của kawaiami 
Bài viết của BeUrSeLf 
My family has four members:my parents,my little brother and me.My mother is 50 years old.My father is 
51 years old.They are business people.My house is on a noisy street.Thus,my parents made a decision to 
open a shop inthe first floor.They sell the product of many company such as fridge,vaccum cleaner, air-
conditioner,washing machine.Their work time begins at 9:00 a.m and ends at 8:30 p.m .My little brother 
is 13 years old.His name is Thai.He is studying at Giang Vo secondary/middle school.He is not only a 
smart pupil but also handsome and good-child.He always make my family feels proud of him.My parents 
and me love him so much.I am 18 years old.I just graduted from KL high school 6 moths ago.I have just 
got my IELTS result.It's so bad,my band score is 5.0.Therefore,I resgisted in IELTS course in British 
coucil in order to improve my score.I will go to UK to study as soon as possible.Studying 
aboard,especially in UK is my dream.And I am trying my best to make my dream comes true.My mother 
oftens takes my younger brother and me go to the supermarket to buy food for all week in weekend. 
Sometimes,when we have free time she takes us go out and eat traditional food of Hanoi.It is so 
interesting and unforgetable memories for me and my brother.In the evening,my mother and me always 
watching TV together.Perhaps,I am going to leave my family,I think I love my family so much and I will 
do the best things to make them feel proud of me.I hope my family member always be happy ,healthy 
and success. 
My family has four members:my parents,my little brother and me.My mother is 50 years 
old.My father is 51 years old.They are business people.My house is on a noisy 
street.Thus,my parents made a decision to open a shop inthe first floor.They sell the 
product of many company such as fridge,vaccum cleaner, air-conditioner,washing 
machine.Their work time begins at 9:00 a.m and ends at 8:30 p.m .My little brother is 13 
years old.His name is Thai.He is studying at Giang Vo secondary/middle school.He is not 
only a smart pupil but also handsome and good-child.He always makes my family feels 
proud of him.My parents and me I (Ở đây là chủ ngữ nên không dùng me được) love him 
so much. I am 18 years old.I just graduated from KL high school 6 months ago.I have just 
got my IELTS result. It's so bad,my band score is 5.0.Therefore, I resgistered in an IELTS 
course in British coucil in order to improve my score. I will go to UK to study as soon as 
possible.Studying aboard,especially in UK, is my dream.And I am trying my best to make 
my dream comes true.My mother oftens takes my younger brother and me go to the 
supermarket to buy food for all the whole week in at weekend. Sometimes,when we have 
free time, she takes us go out and eat traditional food of Hanoi.It is so interesting and 
unforgetable memories for me and my brother.In the evening,my mother and me I always 
watching TV together. Perhaps,I am going to leave my family (be going to là diễn tả 1 dự 
định chắc chắn rồi mà sao dùng perhaps nữa ^^) ,I think I love my family so much and I 
will do the best things to make them feel proud of me.I hope my family member always be 
happy ,healthy and successful. 
Make someone do something 
^^ Try not to make any mistake ! Good luck! 
Bài sửa của wellfrog 
Bài viết của bongnguyet2001 
My family have six persons. They are my father, my morther, one older sister, one older brother, 
one younger brother and me. My father born in Ninh binh , my mother was born in Sai gon, In 
1976, my father met mother and they get married. Now, my family is happy because my sister 
was married. She is have two children. They are active. My mother is who I love the best. she is 
very love me too. I don't have any thing but I prove that I have mother. 
Last year, My older brother get married, I ' m happy because he have a good wife.This year in 
November, he'll a baby. It is a boy. I hope that it is handsome as my older borther. I loce my 
family very much. I wish everyone is happy and good health. 
My family have six persons has six members . They are my father, my morther, one my older 
sister, one my older brother, one my younger brother and me. My father was born in Ninh binh , 
my mother was born in Sai gon, In 1976, my father met mother and they get got married. Now, 
my family is happy because my sister was is married.(dùng hiện tại vì là tình trạng hiện tại ) She 
is have has two children. They are active. My mother is the person who I love the best. she is 
very love me very much ,too. I don't have any thing but I prove that I have mother.( very không 
dùng trước động từ ) 
Last year, My older brother get got married, I ' m happy because he have has a good wife( số ít 
dùng has nhé ).This year in November, he'll has a baby. It is a boy. I hope that it is handsome as 
my older borther. I loce love my family very much. I wish everyone is happy happiness and 
good health